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The girl is sad, and it makes her mad.
She wants to do something, but she cant.

Shes crying all the time, She wants a sign.
That she can do something, But she cant.

Shes feeling like a misfit, Cuz she cant do a shit.
Shes so sad, and it makes her mad.

If her friends are sad, Then shes also sad.
Shes cry, she feels like she wanna die.

She cant take it anymore, She just wanna walk out of a door, To heaven.

Shes so sad, and it makes her mad.

A.R

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Andrew Rasmussen


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by Andy

The Girl
I really like this poem its depressing but then again what isnt? Almost anyone can relate to it.

( Posted by: Aranis32 [Member] On: April 6, 2005 )





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