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Secret lives suck, I donít realize who I am anymore, this damn floor just wonít come clean. Drank some of the fluid that was on it but I canít drink it all I will go crazy again. I have been scrubbing it for hours, my apartments a mess and my patio window is smashed. They came at about three at night. Smashed through the window and attacked me. Good thing I have had all this training, the first one I killed with his own knife and he fell bleeding all over my floor. Which is the blood that I am cleaning up. The other two were fairly easy but they fired off a ton of silencer rounds at me. Littered the whole place with bullet holes. Finally I was able to subdue them and I threw them off the patio.

They never give up, no matter how many of them I kill, so far itís been over eighty, lost count at twenty. Still got a lot to do before the landlord comes around in the morning to collect the damage deposit. This is my first night here and I already have killed them in it. Stupid humans, donít they know that they canít kill me. Their fighting a losing battle, after all I am a Vampire.

Cyber, ---(--------

The world is an apple,
I hate apples. ---(---------


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