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When I woke up
My hampsters were squeeling.
I didn’t know what they were doing!
But I knew they were doing something.
And I saw what was going on.
They were just playing
And I was saying, “Huh? - Why are they squeeling?
This was so weird!
They never squeeled.
(They were always noisy at night -
But I never heared them.)
Every night they were squeeling.
I thought they were fighting,
But they were trying to make babies.
And then it was twelve o’clock to midnight,
And they were all to sleep.
(A note from his family: Be kind and remember he is six. - We'll let you know when he is ready for critique. These are not edited for grammatical and other errors. They are dictated by the authro and recorded.)