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The days go by so slow

With the warm sun beating down on the heads of people in the streets

Walking aimlessly I think of you

Wishing you were here

Basking in the sun and sweet smell of palm trees

I wish you were here to walk hand in hand with me on the sandy beach

I think of you on these sunny days

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NICHOLETTE FILI


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