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Soul Defenders Blade

I ran as i felt the wolves strenghten my legs with thier speed. i didnt have time to look back. I ducked through a small cave hoping for an exit soon. My legs grew weary as i had to bend down to get through its screech began to echo through the cave. I came to see light, and dashed for it. Unfortunelty I had come to a cliff miles high. I came to a sudden stop and my legs gave out. I fell to the floor on my knees. My armor shined in the light with mithril plated leggings. I was once a great warrior but now meat for death. There was no way out and I could sense that it was nearing me. My mind filled with ideas that were no use. I tried to stay calm but that was to hard at the moment, I threw a rock down the cliff and didnt hear it hit the floor. That made my body tingle. I could see its body clearly now, red scaley skin, horns protruded through its back. Teeth like a each one was a chain saw. A long blue tongue slithered through the seal of its lips. Its snake like head had thin eyes on its back with a range of a radar. The arched ones on the front of his head took up most of its face. It seemed to have no nose. A tail swung back in fourth from behind. It was about 2 fathoms long and one fourth a fathom thick. Its tail swung up dirt and pebbles from the ground as it slid. It had speed like a cricket and stealth like a fox, and couldnt be out smarted. I drew my flaming sword in defense. I tried to scare it off but it just took a bite out of my sword and screeched in victory I took my sharped fiery edged blade and drove it through his chest. Green blood oozed from his wound. that only aggravated it more. It cracked a smile and and took the blade out and stabbed its self six or more times in the same spot and I could hear his laugh, I watched in adrenaline and fear as he did so. It scared the crap out of me as he took the sword out one more time threw it in the air, raised his hand and the sword disinegrated in mid air and turned to ashes.

I stood there in fear. It neared me, what i had been fearing for all my life neared me. I steped back and almost stumbled off the edge. I was cornered. It took one gash and then i jumped back and fell. I was falling deep into the depths of hell. I screamed for help, but no one was to be found in thousands of miles. my voice echoed as the hideous monsters screech eveloped it. A Chill shot straight up my spine as thousands of tiny cave spikes drove through every square inch of my body. My corpse lie un noticed never to be found in the depths and I am no more. But then seconds after that i noticed that no pain had been inflicted on me. i layed there and pondered the matters. Nothing i could think of could explain it except...

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