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Long gazes
Long time Wasted
oh no
not Wasted
Used
precious time Taken
not Taken
Borrowed

why is time so precious
if we are just living
taking the time to see
what is around
us

taking time to see
Us
Myself

in the
mirror

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*laura*


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