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Like sun and moon
we stand alone,
we remain apart
until dusk swiftly embraces;
we meet and it's beautiful.
The sky is unique,
in our arms it reflects,
a rainbow from
the past; the present; the future.
When we do not meet,
the sky is an unpainted canvas.
For during those times,
we are lightyears apart,
yet forever watching each other.

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