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Continually observes the beauty around her
Hoping for that special find,
And she always has the right words.
Reverent, articulate, artful,
& elegant, she paints for the blind.

By: Charmr

Continually optimistic;
He marches to the beat of a different drum.
Always squeezing the essence of life from each moment…
Reminding us to live for today.
Mindful of ever engulfing currents, eye to eye he stares trouble down.
Righting the tossed ship to share his bounty and strength to all ships lost in the night.

By: Char


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I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "What’s In a Name?"
by Char

Charmr and Char,
Well not everyone knows you both like some of us old reglerz do....
I really really like this acrostic piece...but knowing you both as well as I do, your names should be Chariisma and Charismatic, just to get more of YOU into the names.
I found this nicely done, reminding me of a song, one you could sing together..so what say YE?
Time to get out your guitars and amps!!
Thank you for sharing this with us, you caught some of the best of each of you in this write.
Love youz,
Darlene xo

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: March 30, 2005 )

Oh! So nice
Having read you both and admired your work, and your love, I smiled when I read this. Demeter's comment made my smile deeper. How right she got it!
"Two separate people writing about each other, or different aspects of one person"
-kinda what love is-

It is lovely to see people who admire one another.
This was 'charming'
-E

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: March 30, 2005 )

Thank You
for your wonderful comments, Dar, Emaks. And to clear it up some Demeter; it's an acrostic done by my husband, Charmr, and me, Char...therefore: Char & Charmr. His views on me and vice versa. The piece was his idea. He thought it a good idea and a means of getting me to write SOMETHING, other than my daily journal entries. Thank you for asking.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: March 31, 2005 )

Char's Back!!!
I was so excited when I saw your name and then to see a combo, what a duo you two make!!! It is wonderful to see you writing again, you have been missed!!!! Excellent.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: March 31, 2005 )

Thank You So Much
Nae...I am glad to see you topped to read and comment. Long time no see. Love your avatar too.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: April 3, 2005 )





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