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And so her name
as day, is night
is shortened
it must surely
fall

Tempered by an ill
defined breeze
likened to love as
love may be likened

And what of love
a surly seed at that
sown on the crest
of winter unrest

Surely she must
perish
as sure, as day
is night
is shortened




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