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The knowing why
Will not assuage
The need building inside.

Why I seek
A pressing weakness
Pushing at tiny cracks in the walls.

A woman’s ache
To once more feel
The onrush of her power.

The secret source
Of wild abandon
Thrill seeking at its worst.

Reassuring her passion
For life, for love
Is still within her grasp.

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The chief cause of failure and unhappiness is trading what you want most for what you want now. - Zig Ziglar



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The following comments are for "Knowing Why"
by Deelyte

I KNOW, Deelyte...
I wish I could write without a rhyme, sometimes.
See, I'm still doing it...Your message is plain and clear, did you just see what I wrote? Plain
and clear, and the knowing why doesn't fulfil the
welling desire to fill the power(did it again)
of all that a woman is...I get this completly, and you did a great job of saying in a few words.
What I like best about poetry, to convey quick.
I've been a little on edge lately, with alot of things, a love being a woman, a Mama, a Mother's
daughter, teaching my boy how to be a good man,
the longing just to hop in that Z28, that's long gone, and get into reasonable trouble, and to just be appreciated.

I'm going on too much, I know you know where I'm coming from as well, as I do you...Great write.
By the way, I am happy with myself, and I know
we are incredibly powerful and we know it, but,
we have business to take care of, and so we will...Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 6, 2005 )





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