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The human heart is a hollow thing,
If not taken under loves white wing,
It strains in rage out of lonely fear...
Desperate for others to draw near...
Silent in its ploy, stream it's wet tears.



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The following comments are for "Longing"
by Vamp Eyes

re:longing
Well said. It's short, tight and powerful. Good writing.

Richard

( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: June 22, 2002 )





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