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Mood Swings
My emotions collide and
Hang freely within
My natural hormonal zone of
Distress and confusion
Soar promptly into
A deduced matter of teen angst.

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by Kaythan

I love the simplicity of this poem, it just seems to ebb and flow so effortlessly, great poem!!!

( Posted by: 0207070 [Member] On: March 28, 2005 )

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