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Light is gone,
Spirit is dark.
Blade is stuck,
with my dark blood.
A pain in my head,
I know I am dead.

The world is an apple,
I hate apples. ---(---------


The following comments are for "dead"
by cyberninja

to cyberninja
This is amusing actually for some strange reason.

Feels too casual though.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: June 22, 2002 )

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