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The descent into the chamber of dark realities is where they say lays the most
horrific of all demon possessions-Does this mean possess to own? I had one
chance to come back the same way, or else I would be forsaken. The tight
grip in the middle of my stomach ached worse than before, and a calm sense
of reality overcame me slowly, then I felt more real-like other people-I was
not sure if this was a good thing-"Slower, and let the door close by itself"
came that ominous voice from the black box behind me-this was like the "field
trip" they mentioned earlier before the examinations began-I guess this was
the reward for perserverence. The room seemed empty and thoughts of cold
beings around me like the ghosts they defined to me-passing about, brushing
against me curiously-the door was closed, and I wasn't alone-this was the
"fear room"-almost empty, that awful ache in my stomach-no more room for any
more pain-the cold beings needed names-I shivered once, then sat down slowly,
closing my eyes, feeling hands lowering me to the ground-then the voices
started calling upon me, this time with no questions-riddles-clues-these
weren't demons of my temptations, but I would not tell "them" that-this was
more secret, and it could be the very thing I needed to get back-get even-
"Shhhh...we are hear to save you-...I smiled, sort of...then sleep overcame
me...this was good-real good.

D.E.M.-05 To be Cont.


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