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moon since gone
Orion stands above my house
long hot night

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Not the poem which we have read, but that to which we return, with the greatest pleasure, possesses the power and claims the name of essential poetry.


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by Huni

Excellent Huni
Oh I love Haiku's, they are Brevity to the max, and you Huni, develope them so well.

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: March 25, 2005 )

Huni's moon
I've been hoping I happened upon something of yours while I have some time here. This is beautiful. So glad it was here for me to read.
We are coming into spring here. Our juxtaposition (is that the right word and is that how you spell it?) ...is a wonderous thought. And again think how many ways we may be similar. Let's multiply it.
Hope you have a comfortable fall, as we ease into spring.

I love your nature poetic, and your poetic nature.
blessings-
Elizabeth

Oh. Your hot summer night is felt, and picture perfect in so few syllables. Well done!

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: March 26, 2005 )

Huni to heavons...
Huni: Past two eves, watched Jupiter follow full "worm" Moon across sky..Always amazed.

Then read "orion." I smiled.

Inspired,
B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 27, 2005 )





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