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Smooth stone skims across surface
Small rings spread outward
Pebble sinks to the bottom

Freedom is living life without needing perfection


The following comments are for "Full Life"
by ChristianAlbert

ChrisAlbert's skipping stones..
CA: Enjoyed your 7/5/7. Brought back memories. As a youngster, I thought my Grandfather could skip a stone across entire river. Like the title.

Good read,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 24, 2005 )

Hello Smooth Stone
Thank you for commenting on this work, I share the same memories. We are lucky to have had a man in our life that could give us the experience.

( Posted by: ChristianAlbert [Member] On: March 26, 2005 )

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