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Of Wings and Rain

Space.
A charcoal smear
on blue canvas.
Below,
Wind chimes singing.
No angels, no wings.
Feathers—
Temptation.
Hesitation.
Rain kisses.
Or teardrops?
Nothingness.
Cracks between the sky.
Between you and I.
Mean as little as a kiss.
As much as all this.
But
where does
Space end
And
All This
begin?




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