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The Cup of Pain
A Poem

What is life minus
Pain,
Tell me, my dear friend.
Life with only happiness,
No tear, no pain,
If you wish this world
To be minus all the
Sufferings, pain.
What would people
Gain, tell me,
Without any
Strain, pain.
Life without pain,
Is just like sugar without,
Sour.
How long will you taste,
Only sugar,
It will bring you,
Diabetes, my friend.
Pain,
Is a kind of joy to experience,
Within oneself,
and to share it,
With someone close,
Or a stranger.
Since, youíre close to me,
Come, letís drink together,
The cup of pain.

:- by G.S.Vasukumar


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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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by g.s.vasukumar

G.S.
Refreshing piece, like the dibetes part and the last line Keep posting!

( Posted by: Vamp Eyes [Member] On: June 20, 2002 )





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