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Creative juices pour from me into a glass,
that neither is half full or half empty.
I drink from it hoping to get the taste of success,
and yet it tastes bitter to the palate.
Even with that I persist onward.


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The following comments are for "Molotov Cocktail of Emotion"
by ryangilr0y

ryangr - short n sweet
I liked:

"...into a glass,
that neither is half full or half empty."

Loved the last line.

Felicia

( Posted by: FeliciaStone [Member] On: March 23, 2005 )





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