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Resting in my head,
Thoughts, of dying souls,
Whose true Ideals,
Are never read.

Protesting, inevitable changes,
Dreams lost, a garden of weeds,
Human kind's weakening will,
Hearts confined in cages.

Sour feelings,
Misplaced trust,
All those painful moments,
Leading to the death,
The death of hope,
The ending of us.

Senseless, destruction of our inner core,
Struggeling to survive, gaining, nothing,
Primitive we are, to lack the strength of will,
What exsactly are we here for?

The end of us,
All we feel,
The end of us,
All we see,
The end of us,
Because we could not hold on.


~Bleed~


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