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Unloved

Infatuation or Love-
I do not know.

When I think of you, I overflow with an indescibable amount of happiness-
I want you all to myself...
But you on the other hand are not interested!

The pain of unrequited love only hurts the bearer- deeply;
to love and not to be loved, to want and not to be wanted-

TO BE USED!!!

Maybe I'm just your whore...but every time I remenisce the times we spent together,
I FEEL LOVE- and not the rape of my soul!

As for you- you can go out into the world- conquer your conquests
and only return when you need my heart...

As for me- I shall anxiously await your return

------
Living Corpse


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by livingcorpse

Unloved
The music of "I shall anxiously await your return" tends to push the rest off the shelf. I want to see it rewritten, each line singing.

( Posted by: KateLouise [Member] On: March 19, 2005 )





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