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To the world,
I have to say alot.
I see the words,
strewn across the sand.
The sun may blind them away,
but waves wash them out to sea.
As the water engulfs my soul,
purge my soul.
There's no real answers that will remain,
just some questions left unanswered.

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The following comments are for "Crumpled Inside of the Bookbag of Time"
by ryangilr0y

got lost
are you asking a question of the ocean or stating how you feel the ocean should reply to you?

( Posted by: bhagwandave [Member] On: March 21, 2005 )

don't know why but most of this is ambigous as to me as it is to you because i was really in an awkward mood at the time so that's why I feel kind blah about it, but wanted to know what people felt. And the title is me explaining how i found this poem hidden in my bookbag.

( Posted by: ryangilr0y [Member] On: March 21, 2005 )

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