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April in Korea

Blossoms
White and purple
cool water trickling down
small evergreens in healing rows
new green







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The following comments are for "April in Korea"
by KateLouise

I must say..
that the imagery is very tactile and i felt as if i were able to touch it as if they were really there but i think it should be titled Korea in April not April in korea becuase it doesn't sound right to me, but its your work don't let me force you into anything.

( Posted by: ryangilr0y [Member] On: March 17, 2005 )

Kate: Korean Spring
Kate: Enjoyed this read. I like variation of haiku used here. Welcome to Lit. Look forward to reading more.

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( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 17, 2005 )





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