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You call me crazy,
and yet I'm the not one looking for another's sanity.
You said that I crack you up,
and I asked if could be the glue?
Even with all of this,
I continue doubt your intentions,
your sincerity.
Yet you were sincere and true,
but pessimism has its way.
The way to destroy.

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