Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
8

(3 votes)


RatingRated by
7Unknown
8chapter1
9Nitz Kitty

You must login to vote

Envy of her friends
Elusive happiness found
In the arms of you


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Suprise Ending"
by Josey


Warning: mysql_fetch_array() expects parameter 1 to be resource, boolean given in /home/lit/public_html/do.php on line 1995
nice one
This is a pretty nice haiku. I like the second line especially. And in the end it makes me smile, which sometime is the best praise you can get. Nice work!

( Posted by: apathy's tears [Member] On: June 25, 2002 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: