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Lust taking a form
Branching through the subconscious
An unforseen situation
That I have placed myself in.

A simple touch can bring one to a state of euphoria
However innocent it may be.

It's a phantasm
That barricades my thoughts.

When I close my eyes, it is all I see.
When I open my eyes, it is all I feel.

Wrenching of my stomach cause my thoughts to quickly decline.

The subject brought me to a slight shock
When I saw him...

I didn't understand
Elation consumed me as I gazed.

I still do not understand
Why I feel so.

To my horror, My words escape me
Fear claims my throat as I stand there in a sweat.

My limitations keep me from stating the truth
Whenever I speak, I want to scream out so all can hear my weakness, my emotion.

The chance of rejection still rings in my head.

A distance too far, That I will feel again
When We speak.

It is impossible
For this dream to come true.

It's in my grasp, But my decrepitude barricades me in.

The risk is too steep fcor this game of chance.

Thus,From a distance, It will have to remain unsaid.

------
Rawr..


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The following comments are for "Limitations"
by Vinceypoo

Pain
I felt the ache in this. Some very good expressions as well Vince. I was thinking that this could be a pretty good poem with some tightening up etc. then I saw 'decrepitude. Okay, I love words and any one who uses one like this as well as you did gets a 10. warm regards huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: March 18, 2005 )





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