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In this place you see all the colors, races and faces
There are so many beliefs
Music and styles rain free
This place so full of life with teachers and students
Friends, families, and enemies
We scatter in our groups, we separate our selves
We discriminate, we hate
But when threatened we stand as one
Shoulder to shoulder, toe to toe
We stand and stare to let them know
That our nation of many people stands;
We stand as one

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by poetfreak

Poetfreak-Great message
I loved this, Poetfreak. I have been watching your writing. You are refining your work and expanding your topics.

Thanks for posting this thoughtful piece.


( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: March 18, 2005 )

So Many
Enjoyed reading this. Among so much darkness, this is a welcome warmth.

Question on the sixth line--"out groups" was this intended to be "our groups"?

( Posted by: KateLouise [Member] On: March 18, 2005 )

Thank you for commenting on my work I appreciate it. And to answer your question it is suppose to be our, it was a typo thanks for pointing it out to me.


( Posted by: poetfreak [Member] On: April 1, 2005 )

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