The following comments are for "Loss of Feelings" by englishgal16
Laura - Good Impact
I liked the content and slow stirring of this heavy poem.
I won't comment about how punctuation could possibly help the reader (it felt like a poem that needed a lot of slow pauses in the right places) because this is not my area of expertise. I was able to read it the way you intended - I think.
Loss of Twist
I think the curtness is innocence here, albeit somewhat unexplored, and thus remains a bit vague.
Stare - tears, distant - lost
These are great conceptual juxtapositions, but they seem to me as if they could be more Laura-special, they could shed a single word that would give it a troubling twist, set it apart from the host of the breaking-up poetry.