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The Best Years
By: BrightDark1

The say these years are
The best of our lives.
If this is so I dread
What comes next.
My emotions run high
Iím under so much stress.
One minute Iím happy
The next I wish the
World would end so
Only I am left.
My friends help a little,
But they canít stop it all.
I donít want to go home.
Iím caught in a dream
Only I can end.
All I need is the key.
Sleepovers are fun,
So are the movies.
Being left alone with him
Is not.
I wish it would end,
But no one can help me.
I must fend for myself.
My teachers are nice,
The workís not so bad.
They give too much homework
Thatís my only complaint.
I wish he would say yes,
But when he does
I tell him no.
My best friend left me
For snobs and a boyfriend,
To sit at the ďcoolĒ table.
I despise them all.
I got through it with the help of you.
I saw mummy this morning.
When I got home
She wasnít there.
Daddy wonít tell me
Where she went.
Iím leaving tomorrow
Leaving it all behind me.
Will you come with me?

They say these years are
The best of our lives.
If this is so I dread
What comes next?



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The following comments are for "The Best Years"
by brightdark1

im sorry
if this is something you seriously are going through then i would just like to say i can relate. i know what it feels like to not know what u want and to have people leave u right when u needed them the most. i just also would like to say check out some of my stuff and see if u can relate. byes:)

( Posted by: simon [Member] On: June 18, 2002 )





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