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A Tree
A Poem


Let us like tree be
be soft spoken
and humble,
Let us be contended
and not grumble,
A tree gives everyone
its fruits,
Wishing nothing in
return and,
standing tall on
its roots.
Let a friend be
as lovely as
a tree,
Who makes you
smile whenever
we see.
A son like a tree
from sun gives
parents shade,
A daughter like
a tree,
Whose wonderful
qualities never
fade,
Let me be in my life
like this tree,
Standing tall on my
feet and helping
others for free.


By :- GSVK




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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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by g.s.vasukumar

A Tree
There seems to be an excellent poem inside this. Maybe try and remove every last crumb that isn't essential to your main thought

( Posted by: KateLouise [Member] On: March 19, 2005 )





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