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He looked at me,
With such intense eyes.
My heart couldn't help,
But to accept his lies.

He spoke words,
Only my heart could hear.
It was his words so deep,
Which embarrased my every tear.

He sang a song,
I knew all too well.
Which gave off a hint of familiarity,
On which I could dwell.

He seemed to look,
Into my deepest desire.
And together we were caught aflame,
We were on fire.

He took a hold of me tight,
And held me in his arms.
After that it was all a blur,
Because all I could see was his charms.

------
Mona Lisa


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