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Marriage
passionate, intimate
pledging, loving, laughing
nuptials, bliss, spouse, sex
lying, cheating, hating
seperation, nullification
Divorce

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Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Marriage/Divorce/Diamonte"
by Nitz Kitty

Sounds right
Goos one Kacee that may be why I have never been there done that.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: March 13, 2005 )

A definite ending
This poem really sounds like the ending to a Hollywood marriage. Sometimes they are not all like this, but yet I appreciate your style and what I mean by style is the way you tell it. Tellin' it like it is. Tellin' it to the man.

( Posted by: xinerama [Member] On: March 13, 2005 )

OUCH!
So much reality in so few words, nice job! Too bad we couldn't stop life at the fun parts and just live there.
Christian Albert

( Posted by: ChristianAlbert [Member] On: March 13, 2005 )

Comments/Marriage/Divorce
Chris ...you are very wise...but really they are not all the same...there are some good ones out there...they must be hiding...

xinerama...I wish it were a Hollywood divorce...I may have gotten something .
good in the settlement.

ChristianAlbert....there weren't any fun times to stop at...

Thanks for reading and commenting...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 14, 2005 )

Kacee Kitty...
It's a shame some of US have this education, must
be for a good reason, educate I guess...Kacee,
they say that which doesn't kill you makes you stronger, so true...Love Ya, Robin...

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: March 24, 2005 )

We are Stronger, Robin
Thanks for the rating and comment ...That is true and we are getting stronger everyday....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 25, 2005 )





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