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i thought i saw it coming
but i didn't know when
this outrage of emotion
would dangle from a thread
i thought it it would be painless
i couldn't recognize
the pain, the hurt, the anger
the fear that comes with lies


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The following comments are for "poem of emotion"
by englishgal16

this is very well written.

( Posted by: ambellina [Member] On: March 15, 2005 )

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