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This is a Laturne piece

sky
clear blue
wide and spread
souls sigh free
fly



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The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.


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The following comments are for "Freedom"
by fairgrace

fairgrace: "free" flying
fairgrace: Enjoy very much this form. Inspiring read..

Smiling,
B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 13, 2005 )





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