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In a single spring night

Warm breeze is flying around
Let the leaves dancing
By their dangling rise a musical sound
Flowers rise to shyly swing
And above so high,
The shimmering stars cluster to sing
A sentimental ode with grand lyrics
And splendid rhythms
The moon is joining the gathering
By sending its merry glimmering
To embrace the calmed ripple of the sea
They all gather together
To celebrate the love between you and me

The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.

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