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A babyís view of the world -

Breast - Drink dispenser

Topless woman - Mobile drink dispenser

Cat - Strange hissing thing that could be food

Crayon - Food

Book - Food

Baby mobile - Hard to reach food

Bath - Big wet thing to pee in

Nappy - Comfy thing to pee in

Lap - Hard thing to pee on

Bottle - Dinner

TV Remote - Hard food with strange sticky out bits

Make up - Food

Dog - Big thing that sleeps next to you

Dad - Someone to pee on

Sister - Someone else to pee on, plus drool on

Brother - Pee, drool and just generally someone to have fun with

Computer - Big food

TV - Weird thing that has moving pictures, could be food

Clean clothes - Not for much longer

Toys - Food? Or something else?

Teddy - Mine!

CD - Shiny food

Sister/brotherís friend/s - No idea, like peeing on them though

Crib - Not sure, I sleep here, but I always try and escape

Soap - Food

Feet - Play toy

Wet patch - Oops, that was me.


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