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Why
What is wrong with people these days
Why do they have such cray ways
Why are there so many players in the game
Why can't we all be treated the same
Why do people always fight
Why is there so much pain at night
Why do people feel the need to kill
Can we not make decisons at will
Why is life so damb depressing
All ones fears are supressing
Why is life so crule
Why do people have to act like fools
Why do younge people choose to die
Why can't grown men have a cry

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