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We walk on clouds of cream-colored light
while whipped flavors float below,
filling the start of each day with a homemade surprise.
The birth of tradition wakes one cup at a time,
our cascaded vision clears near the front of the line.
A blended bouquet drapes a new scent of heaven,
we drink to succumb and by taste we are driven
towards an indulgent experience.

Open and read the pages of my DarkerMind
where one's style of writing comes from deep within.
I don't plan to change the world; just trying to leave my mark.

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The following comments are for "Indulgence"
by KingDon

King Don
Are you new at Lit? I liked a lot of the visuals I got while reading this piece... leave your mark - tell me what you are writing about here. First, I thought it was an icecream sunday, then a cup of coffee...

Glad you joined us, hope to see more of your work.


( Posted by: FeliciaStone [Member] On: March 12, 2005 )

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The name of the chocolate/espresso bar I work at is called "Indulgence By K&S". I wrote the poem in respect for seeing the good in me, before I said a word. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I hope to the public wants to hear more. Thanks

( Posted by: KingDon [Member] On: March 13, 2005 )

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