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Unexpected child
Frightening reality
Love beyond compare


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by josey

to jocey
Very nice haiku, it is really quite clear. The lines are a bit too disconnected though.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: June 16, 2002 )

A first try
Thanks to the both of you for reading my first attempt. I looked it up before and I looked it up again. It still looks like fright.en.ing. I guess I will endevor to persevere. LOL
JOSEY

( Posted by: josey [Member] On: June 17, 2002 )





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