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The looks he gave me,
were ones of passion and desire.
The touches he offered,
were ones of which no one could tire.

The smell he gave off,
was my life's final debt.
The kisses he shared,
trapped my heart in a net.

The secret, "I love you's"
and whispers we shared,
were such special moments.
None could compare.

But now as I think back,
through the special times we've had,
the silent tears roll down my cheek,
and oh I'm very sad.

He left me so long ago,
for what reason I know not why.
But ever since the day he left,
it seems I've only been able to cry.

He said I wasn't the one,
He said we weren't meant to be.
I tried to tell him I needed him.
I tried to show him he needed me.

But now I suppose,
This is how I shall forever be.
I shall die and fade along the shore.
And drift away into the sea!



------
Mona Lisa


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