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Love
is there such thing as love at first sight
is love always a winning fight
can you love young or old
can love make u do what your told
can love make u smlie
or stay for a wile
is love in the air
is love realy there
dose love give u butterflies
in love are there meny lies
dose love make u feel as if u can fly
can love just pass u by
is it love that we share
do u realy even care
is it all just a game
like all the others are you the same
i will never know
unless i have a go
so maby i should try
try to make a tie
but iv been hurt befor
and dont what to open that dore
so please tell me what should i do
do u realy love me
because i think that i love you


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~*~ The One And Only TINI ~*~ !


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The following comments are for "Love or is it"
by tinibaby69

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nice...i enjoyed

( Posted by: VinceClarke241 [Member] On: March 26, 2005 )





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