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well this is my first rant its about the strike system witch anyone whos been throught ccm will be fermiliar with if not it is a system where if you dont do u homework or u have behavor problems 3 times in 1 mont u get 3 strikes and u lose all of ur privleges in extra ciricula activites for that month now this is al fine and dandy and i totlaly agree with it but what i dont agree with is this mont michelle struck out and she didnt get kicked off the team i couldent try out cuz i had struck out i no im at fault but how fair is it that she got 2 stay in basketball when ppl couldent try out when chase got kicked off the team 4 striking out anyway she resenly got suspended cuz she has an anger problem and she threw chace down the hall 4 no reason so anyway when she got suspended there was a vote weather she should be on the team or not and the vedickt was no all of a suden the strike systum is bac in play ppl r striking out and where the fuck is it comming from u no who knows y is it that just because that ***** has a grampa whos been a teacher at that skool scince my father was in gr 8 so what that dosent give her any special privlges now dose it i honesly dont see why see get special rights when the rest of us have 2 suffer i mean it took me not doing a few ( well maby more then a few) assingments 2 not be aloud on the team it took her fucking going phyco and throwing sum 1 down a hall and a vote 4 her not 2 be on the team i think this is bull shit and are fucking poor excuse 4 a pricaple wont do shit about it where is every one elses second third forth and fith chaces shoudent everyone have 2 be suspended b4 they get the boot well i dunno but i say it pretty gay and theres no justice here so all i realy have 2 say is that the athority is just afraid of mr write well i htink he and his stupid grandaughter should fuck them selves

~*~ The One And Only TINI ~*~ !


The following comments are for "strike"
by tinibaby69

This would have been a really funny rant if it had been readable. As it is, the constant misspellings, missing ounctuation, etc. make it an ayesore. And that's too bad because content-wise this is pretty good.

Even if the writing style was a deliberate stylistic choice, it doesn't work because it's too difficult to read.

How about it? You up for an edit?

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

ur a badass ranter tini u go girl

( Posted by: pinup [Member] On: March 9, 2005 )

haha i am a horible typer
hey viper thanks 4 the input maby i should edit insted of just wingin it lol well my oh so important studies r being inturupted so catch u on the flip flop

( Posted by: tinibaby69 [Member] On: March 9, 2005 )

hey tini well this was pretty crazy i like it but i couldn't read most of it but thats ok because your still trying to get your message across and thats awesome more than what most people at CCM are doing. but yha keep trying eventually you will be able to spell and then you will be a good writer cuz we'll be able to read it lol PEACE

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: April 6, 2005 )

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