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Have you ever admired someone from afar?
And dreamed about them to a point
that you feel they are the only one
who can free you from your trance upon
the only one you can think of
witch is them themselves?

Well if you have you are probably in love?

Have you ever felt jealous
when ever that person is hanging out with another person
or if someone else likes them?

Have you protected this person from others
who you fear will hurt or take the person away?

Have you felt that the person is the only one for you
and you must do something soon?

Well if you have you are probably in love.

Love can be a very good think but can also be a very bad thing!

If you are secretly admiring someone then the best thing to do is to tell them your feelings,
but sometimes this isn't good,
and the best place to do it, is in the woods,
Or far way from people,
so its just you and the person
to solve your appeal!

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The following comments are for "Obsession"
by MaleOrderedNurse

Interesting poem!
That is very a very interesting poem. Makes me wonder if love is mostly made up of emotions. But how can you know that you love someone? I mean aren't there different kinds of love? I think love is sometimes I bad thing to get into because then what if the person does something to make you mad or they die or leave you? I guess I have alot of issues because I've been hurt in the past numerous times. The biggest thing was my brother's death. Sometimes it's safe not to fall in love but then you have to think is it really better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all? At least you'll still have the memories, though they can be just as painful. Do you see why I'm a writer because I have so many emotions I just have to share them. But I wanted you to know that it really touched me, your poem I mean! Very insightful! Very passionate and true to the point! Thanks for sharing it!!


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( Posted by: cutiepieus2024 [Member] On: March 11, 2005 )

Thanks for your comment! I know how you feel. I lost my mother to Cancer and I watched her die in the hospital and yes love does hurt, but your right it's better to love and have memories then to no love and not have anything!
Thank's again for your comment.

( Posted by: MaleOrderedNurse [Member] On: March 12, 2005 )

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