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I will not waste today.
I will live in my heart.
I will soar in my spirit,
To join things apart.

I will live without fear.
I will call those I should.
I will climb every mountain,
as if I always could.

I will not fight for anything.
I will surrender to all.
I will pick up my right foot,
an let my left fall.

Each moment will be precious.
Each second will be spent.
Each minute will be accounted for,
By living content.

Freedom is living life without needing perfection

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The following comments are for "One Day"
by ChristianAlbert

ChristianAlbert - Good Advice
How did this one slip by me? I had not seen it before. I suspect that is the case with many people.

It's a golden nugget! The kind we should tape above our mirror and read each day.

I love your thoughful poems.


( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: March 17, 2005 )

Re:Good Advice
I actually pulled this one, it sounded more like an affirmation than a poem. It is what it is, I am glad you enjoyed it. This affirmative poem reflects my attitude everyday, and everyday I seem to get a little closer to being my true soft fearless femanine self. Thanks for commenting, I value your feedback.

( Posted by: ChristianAlbert [Member] On: March 18, 2005 )

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