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I carry inside me a very rare treasure,
It can fill up a room,
Make a handshake a pleasure.

This light if you will, shines all on it's own,
It can not be extinguished,
Tamped, doused, or blown.

With radiance of truth and knowledge from far,
Come stand beside me,
Accepted as you are.







------
Freedom is living life without needing perfection


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The following comments are for "Beacon"
by ChristianAlbert

I know someone like this
This voice sounds like a sweet, gentle lady I met in my son's kindergarden classroom.

If you are anything like her... I confirm this poem - you do have a rare treasure.

God has blessed you...

Felicia

( Posted by: Feliciastone [Member] On: March 10, 2005 )

A Blessed Chickie
Yes it is me and I am not suprised at all you knew oh perceptive one. I finally decided to begin, thanks for your help.

Love, ME

( Posted by: ChristianAlbert [Member] On: March 10, 2005 )

Beacon
I really enjoyed your last poem, but I think that I like this one even more. It flows beautifully, which I found very fitting with it's content. Peaceful.
Elle

( Posted by: ELeanor [Member] On: March 10, 2005 )

I Agree
Elle,

Thanks for the feedback, I was going for simplicity, sometimes for me simplicity is peaceful.

ME

( Posted by: ChristianAlbert [Member] On: March 10, 2005 )





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