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The man's robe was then cast into lots,
who forgave far more than he forgot.

"When you come to your place,
please remember my face."

Still His memory recalls us from naught.

The body is a season,
the mind, a timepiece
and the spirit, a cloud passing.

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The following comments are for "Calvary Limerick"
by SaintEnvious

Calvary Limerick
Interesting. Surprising to find this topic treatd in a limerick, which is usually reserved for light silliness.

( Posted by: KateLouise [Member] On: March 19, 2005 )

I liked this. Thanks for posting.


( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: March 20, 2005 )


And here we are in the lenten season.
Thanks for your encouragement.

( Posted by: SaintEnvious [Member] On: March 20, 2005 )

Very nice..
expect for the idea of man's not mans.

( Posted by: ryangilr0y [Member] On: March 26, 2005 )

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