Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote The sinking feeling by Don mohr It hit me in the gut like a prize fighters fist-I held my stomach with two clenched fists- No butterfly or stinging bee for me, just dizzy-and a little off key- My knees buckled out like a belt too tight-unloosened from the grip that kept everything alright- No sooner than I stood, it hit me once again-that sinking feeling like love lost me again. D.E.M.-04 ------ D.E.M.

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