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The Setting in the Dark
by Don mohr

Amidst these tree lined acres, I sit
crossed legged, and immovable-
A force seen object is moving to me
and I wait with a picturesque mind
filled with temptational objectives-
It wanders aimlessly now, hovering
in-out of my inner secrets-I move
slightly, a shift, then I sleep-
If these happy moments could be
decribed any deeper than this,
I would still be sitting in the Dark
wondering if anything could exist
without the Setting.


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