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I'm sinkin' way down, I'm
sppinin' round, round.

I couldn't stop it if I wanted to.
And by the way, I never wanted to.

I'm fallin' deep, deep.
The climb is way steep.

I couldn't fly up if I
wanted to. And by the way,
I never wanted to.

It's too late now, cuz I
forgot how...

To bring myself back up to you.
But you reach down, your reachin'
to the ground.

Please make me up new, so I
can see you.

I couldn't see you by myself,
who knew? And by the way, I
always wanted to.

You're sinkin' down, down. You're
sppinin' round, round.

You wouldn't stop it cuz you
don't want to. Said by the way, you never
wanted to.

So sink on slowly, into the deep, deep.
We aint climbin' up, the climb's too
steep, yea!


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