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Love your mum.

To whom it may concern you should love your mum and do anything for your mum, just think about all those children out there, who don’t have any mums because they mite of passed away.
I heard on telly that there’s a 13 year old girl out there who has to do all the work and trying so hard to as much as she can to earn money and getting help to that by her brothers and sisters because her parents passed away.
Your mum loves you every time you go missing or run away which I had ran away once but you shouldn’t do that because your mum could be crying and worried about you and wondering were you are.
Imagine and think to your self a minute and think about all the naughty things you have done in the passed and you want to say sorry now’s the time to say sorry and make shore you mean it this time and then you could give your mum a hug and then kiss on the cheek, I feel bad not giving my mum a kiss and a hug once in a blue moon.
By jade Alexandra fanning age 12
Thank you for reading this just think about it please.
And your mummies!!!!!!!



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Miss Jade Alexandra Fanning



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The following comments are for "Mothers"
by Alexandra05

A bit sloppy, but...
Sweet. I think. This would benefit from some formatting and spell checking, but I suppose it could make an interesting mother's day card.

( Posted by: Spider [Member] On: March 7, 2005 )





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